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With these dreams fogging my world
I cannot see past your eyes.

Betrayed and alone you surround me
Your gentle kisses urging me forward.

Each step clears my vision
While each whisper forgets the light.

Incessant hands pulling at me
Holding me within
These lies I feed myself

These thoughts hidden
You compel me.
©2006-2009 ~Kanio-83
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Heh, was bored and realised i havent writen anything in a LONG time so figured id give it a wirl. Tell me what you think? its a work in progress ^^;

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:iconanarlai:
Hmm..this piece tells everything..yet nothing at all. True poetry in it's rawest form. Very nice work.

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:iconkanio-83:
hehehe thank you ^_^

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Your heart has the key to open my life.
:iconstraw-hat-luffette:
That's so good! I love this-- seriously! :heart:

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=Corvigryph is the James to my Jessie. AKA TEAM RAWKET, BITCHES!
*NekoAiTorankusu gives Brock yet another reason to be jealous.
"Buy you a bra, I will!" [Yoda at Victoria's Secret, as told by my luvluv]
:icontalulah618:
Sam...I truly love the complicated simplicity of this, it's wonderfully written.

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The world I love
The tears I drop
To be part of
The wave can't stop
Ever wonder if it's all for you
Sweetheart is bleeding in the snowcone,So smart she's leading me to ozone
Music the great communicator, Use two sticks to make it in the nature

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